石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中!
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet? 1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活 2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行 3. 你对网络依赖症的看法 ●审题概述●
网络给人们带来了丰富便捷的生活,但有些人却因此离不开网络,本文要求考生对网络依赖症简述自己的看法。第一段,简单描述网络为人们提供了丰富而又便利的生活;第二段,很多人觉得离开网络就寸步难行;第三段,对网络依赖症,阐述自己的观点。 【范文】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet? If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life. Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
The power of the Internet is all pervasive, yet its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself. ◇第一段思路点评: 简要描述网络带给人们精彩便捷的生活。 ◇语言点提示: 一句话中连用三个动词draw, realize, provide,显得句子很有气势。 ◇第二段思路点评:
很多人觉得网络已经渗透到我们生活的方方面面,离开了网络就寸步难行。 ◇语言点提示:
从部门、研究机构到普通老百姓,网络已经和我们的生活息息相关。原文通过列举governments, political campaigns, universities and researchers and common folks,一气呵成,让我们真切地感受到网络无处不在。
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石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中!
◇第三段思路点评:
阐述自己对网络依赖症的看法。 ◇语言点提示:
(1) online pornography and violence,网络色情和暴力。
(2) Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence.网络欺诈每天都在发生。 Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法:文凭越高越吃香 2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识 3. 你的观点
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本文针对时下一种流行的说法:文凭越高越好,要求考生结合实际阐述自己的观点。第一段,简要描述目前社会上流行的说法:文凭越高越吃香;第二段,有些人却持不同的意见,认为文凭不等于知识;第三段,结合自己的实际情况,阐述自己的观点。
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Knowledge and Diploma It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality—the higher diploma one gets, the more popular he becomes. On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion. ◇第一段思路点评: 简要描述最近社会上的一种流行说法:文凭越高越好。 ◇语言点提示:
(1)句型It is generally believed that=It is generally acknowledged that 众所周知。 (2) a job candidate应聘者 ◇第二段思路点评:
有些人则持不同的意见,认为文凭不能等同于知识。 ◇语言点提示:
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石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中!
(1) the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience 对一个人的教育经历的认可。 (2) 特别注意本段中所使用的连接词语:on the contrary, besides。 ◇第三段思路点评: 以己为例,阐述自己的观点。 ◇语言点提示:
(1) equate a diploma with knowledge 将文凭和知识等同
(2) nothing but a proof of a short-term study 只是对某一短期学习的证明
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On VolunteeringActivities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作 2. 志愿者工作的社会意义 3. 作为大学生,应该怎么做
范文:
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China. Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.
As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.
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石家庄佳鑫诺学校 三月份点睛模考班火热招生中!
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