Unit4 单元主题写作点睛
慰问信写作
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写作任务1
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Johnson来信说他因为对父母说谎而受到严厉 批评，因此他情绪低落。请你用英语给他写一封回信，主要内容包括：
1. 进行安慰； 2. 指正错误； 3. 给出建议。 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Johnson，
I，m sorry to hear that you feel depressed now.
Yours, Li Hua
谋篇布局 1. 试题解读
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，题目要求你就Johnson因为对父母撒谎受到
严厉批评的事情给他写一封回信。从提供的信息来看，题目并未给出所有的细节，这给学生留下了自由发挥的空间。
2. 写作提纲
第一段导语:礼节性问候和安慰 第二段主体:指正错误;给出建议。 第三段结尾:提出希望。 3. 注意事项
(1)时态:描写已发生的事情，用一般过去时;提出合理建议用一般现在时。
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(2)在表达过程中应注意叙述的条理性,特别注意句式的合理运用。 (3)写作时注意适当增加细节，并使用适当的过渡词,以增强文章的流利性。 参考范文
Dear Johnson，
I’m sorry to hear that you feel depressed now. Although it’s a shame that you got
punished severely by your parents，it’s a useful experience and lesson for you，so you don’t have to feel so depressed, and just let it go.
As a high school student, it’s wrong of you to lie to your parents. We have been
taught to be honest since we were very young. We should behave honestly and be ourselves in daily life. In addition，if you get into trouble and need your parents’ help， you’d better go ahead to say it to them. In a word，don’t make up any excuse and lie to your parents.
I hope you can feel better and come back to the normal life.
Yours, LiHua
写作任务2
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer)后处于
极度的痛苦之中。美国癌症协会（ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给 她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写 一
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封慰问信。 注意：
1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况； 3. 词数100左右。
Dear Amy，
谋篇布局
本文要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，鼓励Amy与病魔斗争。考生在写作
时可遵循以下几点：
(1)审题,信中不得出现考生的真实情况，词数100左右；
(2)确定要点：自我介绍，得知她的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，最后
祝她早日康复；
(3)扩展要点，丰富要点，将句子补充完整； (4)连句成篇，将句子连成短文，打好草稿；
(5)全面检查，检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号错误，修改人称、时态、句子
结构逻辑错误。
(6)书写要规范。
参考范文 Dear Amy，
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your
present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter.
That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is，You are sure to make it.
I will try my best to ask all my friends，schoolmates and relatives to write letters
to you, which may help you. ^ I hope they will give you more courage to live on.
May you recover soon.
Yours,
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Li Hua
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