环球雅思VIP作文(不外露)

(2009.1.10) Bar Chart

Some people believe that the range of technologies available to individuals will increase the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (科技类)

【In today’s world, the gap between the rich and the poor has an increasing trend. Some people believe that technology available to individuals is the cause of it. And to some degree, I also agree with this idea.】

【Today, the phenomenon that the gap between the poor and the rich is widening has captured wide concern. Some people hold the belief that it is the technology available that leads to the inequality of economic status. I think this view is to some degree oversimplified. /I hold conservative attitude toward this view. / I think, it is superficial that technology is the culprit of the social imbalance. 】

Question: whether the development of technologies can widen income gap?

(1) 技术的发展对于人的教育水平提出了很高的要求。处于教育资源匮乏地区的人很难掌握新的科技，因而无法从事要求较高的工作，带来收入的减少。相反，教育资源丰富的人容易掌握高科技，提高收入。从这个角度来说，科技在一定程度上扩大了收入差距。Technological progress has imposed a higher standard for education because many jobs only need people with qualifications or relevant working skills. Unfortunately, people from regions without adequate education resources find it hard to learn new technologies, thus unable to engage in hi-tech work. In this knowledge-driven society, possibilities of high payment are very rare for those less educated. By contrast, qualified people can find hi-tech work with decent pay. In this sense, we may suggest that technology is one of the contributing factors to the widening of income gap.

(2) 但是从另外一个角度来说，科技发展提高了工作效率，能够在更短时间内，创造更多的社会财富。同时创造了更多的工作岗位，让更多的人有工作，有收入。因此科技发展并非是造成差距的根本原因。

However, facts show that the development of technologies has enhanced working efficiency. Thus more social fortune is created in shorter time period, which will be distributed to people. Objectively, if the distribution is transparent, individuals’ wealth will increase. In the meantime, technologies will create many industries and job opportunities. So more people will be employed and paid. From this, we can find technology is, at least, not the direct and basic factor behind income gap.

(3) 从上面分析可以看出来，造成差距的根本原因在于资源分配的不公平，尤其是教育资源的分配。其次，税收，社会保障缺乏，都是导致不均的重要原因。 As has suggested above, the underlying cause of income gap lies in inequality of distribution of resources, in particular the accessibility of education resources. And other factors such as the lack of social security and the imbalance of tax policies also play a part. Therefore, the technological progress is not to blame for the gap between haves and have-nots.

(2009.1.15) 流程图

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Some people believe that students at schools and universities can learn more from teachers than from the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (教育类+科技类)

Stepping into new century, we find that internet has become an integral part of our life; education is no exception. There is a perception that teachers remain the main source of knowledge for students rather than the internet. As for me, it is of some truth though we cannot deny the advantages of the internet.

注意区别“因特网（远程教育）是否可以取代传统课堂教育）”。

Body 1: (采取让步论证) 因特网的普及和发展，给我们的生活带来了各种巨大的改变。我们可以通过因特网去沟通交流，甚至进行贸易交易。在教育领域，我们可以通过因特网查阅信息，及时了解这个世界。比如我们可以通过GOOGLE迅速的搜索我们所需要了解的作家，或者书籍。也可以随时查阅到我们所需要的数据。但是因特网在目前并不能成为我们学习的主要渠道。主要原因在于，首先，因特网的信息量虽然庞大，但是不成体系。其次，因特息良莠不齐，青少年往往无法区分。再次，因特网学习无法给学生培养道德品质，审美能力。

The development and prevalence of the Internet render us immense changes. In domain of education, students can browse abundant information via the internet so as to widen their horizon. Specifically, we can search out the information about the authors or their works. And also we can download the data that we need or even borrow the books from online libraries. Despite all these advantages, the internet cannot become the main channel of study, at least in present time. At first, the information from the internet is not systematic. And youngsters cannot distinguish whether the information is beneficial or harmful. Furthermore, students’ virtues as well as values cannot be cultivated in the right way by internet.

Body 3:传统的老师课堂教育有着不可替代的方面。一方面，老师传授的知识比较系统，而且详尽。其次，老师传授知识的过程可以互动，解释，答疑。再次，老师不仅仅是个学生理论知识的辅导，更重要的是教会学生判断是非。而且，老师教学有利于提高学生的品德。 Teachers play a dominant role in students’ learning at universities and schools, which cannot be replaced by the internet. For one thing, the knowledge from teachers is more systematic and detailed. And then teaching in classes is a process of interaction between teachers and students by means of explaining and questioning. Moreover, the teachers are not only responsible for academic knowledge cramming, but also for the cultivation of values.

Therefore, at schools and universities students learn more from teachers. They can not only learn theoretical knowledge, but also form personality and virtues. Internet, as a new means of information channel, will be helpful for students’ learning.

(2009.1.17) Line Graph

Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement of the transportation and communication technologies. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon. (社会现象类)

The modern age is characterized by the increasing social mobility. People today change their jobs periodically and move from one place to another casually. The effects of this phenomenon, both

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negative and positive, are subjected to discussion.

Body 1: advantage of living wherever they want. 1. 21st century is characterized by social mobility, which enables people to find more opportunities and proper jobs. And also this practice strengthens the communication of talents and intelligence. 2. This encourages the development of communication and economy. 3. This gives a full play to personal freedom.

Body 1: In the past, people were confined in certain area due to the underdevelopment of transportation and communication means. But today people can change their jobs and find the place suitable for them without considering too much. Advantages are obvious. This mobility can bring people more opportunities and more choices. New places and new work can offer people more chances to know more, thus widening their vision. In addition, people can enjoy more freedom and exercise their ability. Without restrictions, they can choose wherever they feel fully relaxed and comfortable. Their imagination and creativity can find the right vent out.

Body 2: However, this practice may cause some negative effects. The most noteworthy one is that quick mobility will lead to the imbalance of regional development. Naturally, talents and funds will surely flow into those developed areas, which may cause the underdeveloped area to be even worse. What’s more, if this phenomenon continues in the long run, there will arise some problems much more serious. For example, the frequent migration of people will lead to the loss of some community traditions, cultural identity and local conventions. This, to some degree, is the cause of today’s segregation of social groups and loosening social relationships.

In conclusion, social mobility is an inevitable trend due to the development of society and technology. Of course, people can enjoy more freedom and opportunities. But its negative effects such as regional imbalance and loss of cultural traditions cannot be neglected.

(2009.2.7) Bar Chart

Some people believe that rich countries provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (决策类)

主题分析：金钱援助的弊端，有一些贫穷国家之所以贫穷是因为缺乏技术，缺乏资源；另外一方面，也因为这些国家存在一定的现象，如果给予金钱，往往被贪污。金钱援助具有不可持续性，往往造成被援助国的懒惰，不思进取，只会造成更加贫困。金钱援助由于缺乏监管，往往被用作其他途径，而不能到达民众手中，或者无法到达所指定的用途。但是财政援助也有好处，更直接，效率更高，技术援助的周期太长，不可预料因素过多。（授之以鱼，不如授之以渔的道理。结合剑4阅读small enterprise credit.）

第一段：在某些不发达国家，猖獗的使得经济援助无法真正得到使用。因此有些人提出，发达国家对贫穷国家的援助应该转向技术，知识和教育的援助。这种看法在目前有很好的实践意义，但是不能完全否认金钱援助的效用。

In some underdeveloped countries, rampant corruption and embezzlement render financial aid unable to reach targeted victims and fulfill its original purposes. So some people put forward that rich countries’ aid should shift to the introduction of technology, knowledge and education. Though this suggestion is feasible and practicable, the effects of traditional financial aid cannot be

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denied completely.

Body 1: why the shift is necessary at present?

Considerable evidence has indicated that there are numerous loopholes and defects of sheer financial aid. In some underdeveloped countries, corruption is really a headache and a large amount of funds from donation has been embezzled. The fund fails to reach people in poverty and difficulty; and public facilities are out of repair due to the lack of money. In these countries, the lack of lawful supervision renders the financial aid an appetizing meal for local officials and an airy dream for poor people. On the other hand, the financial aid is not sustainable. (在很难论证的情况下，可以适当地进行比喻) There are some similarities between financial aid and some medicines like tranquilizer. Specifically, it can calm the patients down immediately but fails to heal his or her psychological disorders. Likewise, financial help may solve some problems superficially, but cannot remove poverty completely.

Body 2: The effect of financial aid.

However, it does not necessarily mean that financial aid is of no redeeming features. When we are aware of the disadvantages of economic assistance, we should not go to another extreme by stopping it completely. After all, financial aid is more effective and efficient in dealing with some emergencies. And if rightly supervised, it can also avoid the drawbacks mentioned above. (Maybe, we should beware of the possibility that some people take them as the excuse for cutting financial help to poorer countries.) 问题解决：是否应该结合其他援助手段？其他援助手段有哪些。应该明确，要结合其他手段，主要包括赠与技术，免于收取昂贵的技术专利费用；派遣专家团队；派遣医疗和教育队伍进入，从根本改善当地经济状况；同时，对于财政援助，应该有国际监督，或者由国际组织如红十字会负责资金的流向。

(2009.2.12) Line Chart + Table

The development of technologies is causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to adopt a simpler way of life while others say that technologies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (科技类)

Low-carbon lifestyle

These two views are not mutually exclusive. Emission, public transportation.

Cut unnecessary travels may reduce emission.

Refuse to use plastic bags and throwaways.

Overall, to lead a simpler way of life means that we should minimize our desires for relaxation and comfort. That is to say, we should be equipped with the awareness of protecting environment. Apart from the environmental awareness, some countermeasures against pollution are indispensable. Technologies take the center stage. New engine. Waste water disposal technologies etc.

低碳环保和技术环保

The development of economy may cause the deterioration of environment. Therefore, some people may suggest the best way to stop environmental deterioration is to slow down economic development. What is your opinion?

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在讨论这个主题的同时，尽量能够把“技术”具体化为：汽车，电子产品，电子设备等等具体的物件，避免空对空论证。

(2009.2.19) Bar Chart

Today, most people understand the importance of protecting the environment, while some people think individuals are too weak to take actions and make a difference. Discuss why do such people hold this opinion and tell what should be done to solve the problem. (Report) 首段：

Today, the deteriorating environment necessitates every individual’s protection. However, some people feel frustrated due to the belief that personal strength is too weak to combat the current tendency. But in my view, though individual strength is weak, it may be strong when combined together.

Body 1: 首先针对“个人力量太薄弱，不足以改变”，其原因；批判其不正确之处。 原因之一， 目前环境污染的规模很大，属于全球问题。第二点，形式很严峻，看起来很难改变这个进程。第三点，全球环保者之间缺乏有效的组织和系统的联系。这三点原因造成了个体的环境保护者觉得力量的渺小和微不足道，甚至失望，挫折。

Body 2: 如何解决环境保护问题，从个人，，等角度出发。NGO

(2009.2.28) Line Graph

Some people believe that building more sports facilities is beneficial for the public health while some others think the practice has limited effects. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (决策类)

类似于：junk food. To educate people, but the effect is limited. 思考出发点：体育设施， 公众健康。

Obesity, cardiovascular disease and insomnia are labeled as common complaints suffered by modern people. And most of them are closely associated with the absence of physical activities. Hence, it is argued that the establishment of more sport facilities will benefit public health. And I think it is far from enough.

It should be noted that the promotion of sport awareness relies on more investment of sport facilities. Nowadays, despite living standard improvement, our living quality experiences a surprising deterioration, largely due to the lack of physical exercises. So the advocate of more exercise requires huge investment in building facilities. The wide availability of facilities will definitely ignite public enthusiasm of participation. The sport facilities can be established in some densely populated communities, some gardens and even some comparatively underdeveloped regions. This may render every individual access sports on a daily basis.

The scarcity of facilities may play a part in people’s lack of sport awareness, but the deep-rooted cause is manifold. For example, in some developed areas, the abundance of sport facilities is amazing, but they are rarely used. Recently conducted survey indicates that people may be exhausted after a day’s toil. And quick living tempo spares them little time to consider their health. So the most essential thing is to give people more time and leisure to participate in activities. In conclusion, the establishment of sport facilities is beneficial for the promotion of health

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awareness. However, it should be ensured that people can afford enough to do physical exercise; otherwise, all those facilities will be reduced to some useless exhibition.

(2009.3.5) Bar Chart + Pie Chart

Newspapers have great influence on people’s opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phenomenon and analyze the positive and negative effects of the phenomenon. (Report)

In the age of information explosion, newspapers serve as an indispensable channel for people to know the outside world and make their judgment. But its influence may be twofold; newspapers may be misleading and exaggerating. 参考剑桥雅思5文章

报纸对于人们思想观念的印象，其原因要从主客观角度来分析。

（主观，客观；直接，间接；表面，根本） 个人对于世界的看法和判断，基于其所获取的信息，而恰恰报纸是个人获取信息的主要渠道之一。(It is widely accepted that people’s values and perceptions towards the world is based on the information in their mind, while newspapers serve exactly as the main channel of information. Therefore, people’s view of the world is largely determined by the media including newspapers. ) 报纸业非常发达，无处不在，渗透到生活的方方面面，人们充分暴露在媒体信息的狂轰滥炸之中。（Newspaper has permeated into every facet of our daily life. And people are constantly exposed to the bombardment of news and information. ）

主观上，人们喜欢从报纸和媒体上获取自己所需要的信息，来佐证和强化自己的观点；而报纸也喜欢满足大众的需求，提供公众所需要的信息，如灾难等。（Subjectively, people have the inclination to obtain information they are interested in, so as to certify and intensify their conceptions and opinions. In the meantime, newspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That can lead to significant distortions of perception. For example, …） 影响：

媒体容易哗众取宠，容易夸大。（Newspapers tend to be sensational and exaggerating. As for most of the newspapers, how to win more audiences is what they focus on. So maybe it is justified for them to print some news which is eye-catching and even thrilling. And exaggeration is a frequently-used trick for them to capture more attention from the readers. However, even though this practice is justifiable for winning more market share, it objectively distorts public attitude and the truth. ）

媒体容易误导读者观众，容易成为某些利益集团的工具。

(2009.3.7) Bar Chart

Many people believe that music plays an important role in the society. Others, however, believe that music is simply a kind of entertainment for individuals. What’s your opinion? (抽象类) Undoubtedly, music is commonly regarded as a means of entertainment for people from all walks of life. But it is not absolutely restricted to amusing people. Its functions and effects are far more than that.

(高分开头)经典音乐和流行音乐分野：

Beethoven, Bach and Handel are not unfamiliar names for most people all over the world. We remember them and love them not as entertainers but great artists and supervisors of our soul. Therefore, their music works are not just to entertain us but plays an important role in cultivating

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our mind and even boost the advancement of our society. It should be noted that most popular music mainly serves as the means of amusement. 音乐对于社会的作用， 从抽象意义来说： 也许和笑一样，音乐通常被看做没有实际效用和生物意义的一种多余的愉悦享受。而实际上任何一个民族都无一例外地拥有自己的音乐，在任何一个社会发展阶段都有着不同的音乐风格和模式。也就是说，音乐是伴随着社会发展的，不可或缺的一个因素。（Music bears some similarities to laughter: Both are defined as a kind of pleasure and amusement of no apparent social effect and biological purpose. And any nation has its own music without exception. Each social period of social development is characterized by various music styles and modes. In other words, music serves as an indispensable element in the course social advancement.）

总体而言，音乐是一种社会文化的反应， 它是对生活的一种抽象的，形而上的反应。它可以充当一种文化身份认同， 可以凝聚一个民族，凝聚公众的力量。(In general, music acts as the reflection of social culture, which is abstract and metaphysical. It also is the cultural identity; for example, when we sing the national anthem, we feel united and a sense of belonging to a certain culture. Music in this sense can unite the whole nation and gather the people’s power. ) 音乐里充满了一个民族和国家创造性和想象力，无数的民族和国家，都有自己的独特的音乐和风格形式，比如。

(What’s more, music is overflowing with a nation’s creativity and imagination. So every nation has its own unique music style. For example traditional Chinese music boasts of its gracefulness and decency. )

从具体角度来说：

当然音乐可以起到一定的娱乐作用，尤其是流行乐，针对年轻人的流行乐更加的活泼，充满了时尚的气息，反应了年轻的心态，热情和叛逆。 当人们在工作之余，音乐可以起到很好的放松作用。

同时音乐也是一种表达的方式和途径，比如年轻人的相爱。 (后两点是具体的社会功用)

Based on the analysis, entertainment belongs to just one aspect of the manifold blessings of music. More importantly, music serves as the token of culture, a painkiller of our soul and a cultural identity. Therefore, it is an essential part of our society.

(2009.3.14) 地图题

Today, more and more students are choosing to move to other cities to have higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? (教育类)

Today local universities seem not to be preferable for students. They tend to choose those in other cities or even other countries to continue their higher education. Surely, their preference is to some degree justified.

When you step into a completely unfamiliar environment, you have to face numerous knotty problems and find some solutions. This will help you foster the awareness of independence, which act as a must in your future life. At least, to further your study in a new city can enrich your social circle and life experience. Otherwise, if you are restricted in your hometown, you will never have the chance to make more new friends.

It does not necessarily mean that to continue higher education in other cities is immune from any

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criticism and drawbacks. Admittedly a student entering a new environment may have his or her independence fostered; however, they may also be exposed to negative information and risks. For example, due to the absence of supervision and care, some youngsters may be addicted with smoking and indulged in video games. On the other hand, to study in a new city may cause the soar of living cost. It should be noted that this may become a heavy burden for some underprivileged families, especially from those desolate areas.

(2009.3.21) Table

It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness rather than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (决策类)

Some people think to promote the healthy lifestyle is more effective than spending much on treatment. As for me, the two practices are not mutually exclusive and both should be encouraged. Lip service Social security

Citizen’s loyalty

There is no consensus over the controversy whether new technologies should be introduced to change the underdevelopment of some countries, or free education should be provided to local people. Actually, both are in great need for developing countries.

The poverty and underdevelopment of developing countries can be attributed to some factors such as the lack of industries, absence of technologies and the inaccessibility of education and so on. In this sense, to introduce new technologies to those poverty-stricken areas is effective in changing the local situation. For one thing, new technologies can solve some urgent problems for local people. For example, new medical equipments can relieve the pressure of the shortage of medical resources in developing countries. For another, new technologies enable local people to have more chances of business and job opportunities. They can make full use of new technologies to development economy and improve their living standard.

It is undeniable that new technologies can solve some urgent problems effectively. But the deep-rooted cause behind the poverty of developing countries may be more than the lack of technologies. The effects of new technologies are usually short-term and immediate, but not sustainable. For example, for some impoverished people, they may have no access to new technologies. What can really change their fate is the equal access to education. Considering people’s low affordability of high tuition, free education is a better solution for poor people. Thus they can have the chance to rise.

Thus, in dealing with the situation of developing countries, new technologies can provide some immediate solutions, but in the long run, free education will turn out to be more effective and sustainable. A wiser way is to combine them together to improve and develop those countries.

(2009.4.4) Bar Chart

People nowadays are living in societies where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (社会现象类)

商品的丰富，物质主义的流行，较低的价格都促成了商品的消费高企。相比从前，更廉价的

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消费品固然似乎给消费者带来了好处，但是其对资源的浪费，消费主义的横行都有着不可推卸的责任。（更深层次，消费品价格的走低，降低该行业从业者的收入等）

The abundance of commodities, the prevalence of materialism and lower prices contribute to the soar of consumption. By comparison, cheaper goods have seemingly brought consumers some benefits; but its side-effects such as the waste of resources, the spur of consumerism cannot escape the blame.

The promotion of efficiency and fiercer trade competition render the price of commodities lower than before. People can afford dazzling types of goods and satisfy their needs with little cost. To a certain degree, this has largely reduced people’s living cost and provided them with more comforts and convenience. What’s more, the availability of cheaper commodities gives people more sense of happiness. And also the market will be healthier and sustainable.

However, the decline of commodity price may hurt in some aspects. After all, everything existing in this world may turn out to be a double-sided coin. For example, cheaper goods may impair the practitioner’s passion of related trades due to the decline of their payment. On the other hand, cheaper goods may encourage consumerism and buyers will not cherish anything they bought at lower price. This practice will surely lead to extravagance and waste of resources. What’s worse, cheaper goods may lead to vicious competition, and some manufacturers may resort to some under-table means such as counterfeit, fakery and knock-offs. Thus consumers may be exposed to flooding fake goods with inferior quality.

In conclusion, contrary to common expectation, cheaper price is not necessarily beneficial for people in a long run. Of course, it is not saying higher price is preferable. The point is that the quality and price of commodities should strike a balance.

(2009.4.18) Table

Some people believe that if products are of good quality or meet people’s needs, people will buy them naturally. So advertisements are not necessary and no more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (抽象类)

The advertisements just encourage people to buy in quantity instead of quality. What’s your opinion?

(酒好不怕巷子深) Impulsive purchase Misleading information Exaggerating

(2009.4.25) Pie Chart

Some people believe that computers and internet carry more weight than traditional education in children’s study. Some others believe that traditional schooling and teachers are still essential and more effective. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (教育类)

Today, many courses, provided by some prestigious universities such as Harvard and Yale, are available on the internet for students around the world to download and learn. This publicity of courses never poses a threat to traditional education. So internet and traditional education can coexist with equal importance in the coming age. Before their adulthood

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If you want to pass the exam, you must work hard.

To pass the exam necessitates your hard work.

I have failed many time in the ielts exam, I felt greatly depressed. Repeated failures in the ielts exam depressed me greatly. Effort.

明确自己的立场：传统的课堂和老师教育在相当长的时间内，都是必须和无可替代的；而远程教育的兴起，固然可以作为传统教育的极大补充，甚至在某些方面相对传统教育有很大的优势，但是基于一些传统教育的属性，目前无法替代，只能并存，或者补充。

Body 1: 传统的学校教育和老师传授已经存在上千年的时间，很多弊端和缺点都得到了弥补和改善，在目前而言，比较符合教育的内在规律和逻辑，能够形成很好的效应。具体而言，传统课堂教育有助于建立良好的社会关系，同学之间的影响对于学生性格的形成，习惯的培养，世界观的形成，有着不可替代的作用。而传统的老师传授知识，也符合人际交流的习惯，老师授课是面对面的交流，能够即时地解决学生的问题，能够即时地了解学生的问题，更为可贵的是，老师的亲身传授可以塑造学生的性格，以自身的道德和品质影响塑造学生的道德品质。(Traditional schooling and teaching in person can be traced back to several thousand years ago; it has been carried to almost perfection today. At least, in current society, it is more acceptable and effective. For example, traditional schooling focuses on collective activities, which renders students more chances to establish social bonds. This also helps shape the personality of different individuals and promotes their sociability.

On the other hand, students are more accustomed to teaching in person rather than to facing cold-blood machines. Teachers can have a face-to-face talk with students, having an immediate knowledge of student’s troubles and finding some in-time solutions. Fortunately, teaching in person can foster student’s values and high-mindedness. And the warmth between humans can never be achieved by machines, however developed they are. )

Body 2: It is undeniable that internet is changing our world at an alarming rate. It has permeated into every facet our life, and education is no exception. It has changed our traditional education for better and even showed greater impact on youngsters. It is flexible for students to choose their courses and arrange their schedule. Furthermore, the cost of distance learning is comparatively lower than traditional ones. And also learning through the internet is a great blessing for students from remote areas where economy lags far behind and resources are limited.

However, we cannot say traditional teaching is on the verge of extinction or distance learning is superior to the tradition one. After all, the fact shows that schooling and teachers are prevalent in most parts of the world and will continue in a long run.

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Going to museums is an enjoyable thing to do. But some people think that it is an educational trip. Give your explanation to both sides and discuss your point of view. (抽象类) 博物馆和学校的区别在于，它能够结合娱乐与教育的功能。 关键词是museum

在我国，博物馆正如同雨后春笋一样，不断涌现出来，也正成为城市业余生活的一个很重要的部分。有两个分歧观点，一是认为其服务娱乐，另一认为博物馆重在教育。我认为。。。 In our country, museums are mushrooming at an alarming rate and becoming an important part of

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citizens’ leisure time activities. But views divide as for museums’ function. Some hold they are for enjoyment while the opposite think they should focus on education. I am in favor of the idea that museums mainly serve as a window through which we can know the world.

Undoubtedly, museums render people great enjoyment and serve as a place for people to entertain themselves. Young people prefer to visit museums because they need not worry about the pressure in schools. There is no homework and no examinations for them. And they need not memorize monotonous data and tedious formats. Instead they can see thousands of fresh things they are interested in. In the meantime, even adults like to visit museums for the fact that museums can give them a chance to avoid pressure in work and life. Museums can make them know more about the world and soothe their curiosity. In a sense, museums create a place for people to get away from trivial worries and realistic concerns, thus become attractive for people from all walks of life. 在body 2当中用一两句话承认其具有一定的enjoyment 功用，但是迅速指出，这种enjoyment的最终目的，还是加深人们对知识的接受，提高认识的效率，寓教于乐的一种形式而已。纯粹把去博物馆当做娱乐的做法是不可取的，这是对知识的不尊重，同时也是对资源的浪费。

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(教育类)

Introduction: it is undeniable that interest is a good thing, but over-emphasis on interest may turn out to be going to extremes.

我们鼓励以兴趣在第一位（priority）, 但是我们同样鼓励培养教育具备广博知识，健全知识的人。 明确立场：Fact shows that interest tends to be a persuasive excuse for some students not to choose some subjects. They hold that they will not have excellent performance without interest. As for me, a wide range of subjects is a must for teenagers who are not so mature in making decisions. Body 1: 学生尚不成熟，兴趣固然有助于促进学习，但是兴趣在中学生身上会转移。It has been widely accepted that interest helps a lot in promoting the effectiveness and efficiency of study. However, it is also noteworthy that teenagers’ interest is unstable. It may change from one to another in a short period and rarely keeps consistent for a long time. /学科的发展均衡很重要，尤其是一些基本学科如数学，哲学等，即便不喜欢，也必须培养，这有助于培养基本常识，基本道德素质。Meanwhile, the balance of academic ability is of considerable importance in children’s education. Some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are necessary in establishing some common senses and critical thinking for students. They should be encouraged to learn these subjects despite their abhorrence. /毕竟教育不是培养天才，而是培养符合社会规范的人，能够辨别是非，有常识的人。After all, the purpose of education is not to create some extraordinary genius, but to foster a person with moral standards and social responsibility. 不可否认兴趣的确促进学习，但是（Analogy） 如同吃饭一样，你可以对某些食物很感兴趣，但是导致营养的不均衡，从而出现肥胖等问题，因此即便你不喜欢蔬菜，也从均衡发展的角度，需要补充各种你不喜欢的食品。

Body 2: 但是我们可以充分利用兴趣的正面作用，因为如果一个学生对某些学科有兴趣，那么他就会积极，主动地投入到学习中去，学习效果会非常好。所以我们要充分利用学生的兴趣，在学好感兴趣学科的同时，要引导他们多学其他学科。However, the positive sides of

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learning by interest should also be taken into consideration. In most cases, interest can spark students’ enthusiasm and energy in study. If a student show interest in a certain subject, he or she will get involved more energetically. Thus better effects will be achieved. By contrast, if students are forced to learn all subjects, they may become rebellious and some opposite effects may turn up. Therefore, students should be guided to learn subjects they are interested in and also be encouraged to learn more subjects.

In conclusion, students should learn more subjects, especially in primary and secondary schools. This is beneficial for the formation of sounder values and wider vision. And their interest can be considered as a stimulus for better learning effects but should never be overemphasized.

Some people show concern about the proposal that students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Skeptics hold that this may lead to disrespect and indiscipline. This concern is not wholly unjustified.

How to improve education quality is a wide concern for schools as well as parents. It is advised that students should evaluate their teachers, but this proposal has met strong opposition. I think it is feasible to some degree but some negatives should be considered beforehand.

Traditionally, students are not allowed to challenge teachers’ authority. But the trend has changed in the new era that they can criticize their superiors and tutors in some schools. Of course, there arise some disagreements but this practice, on a whole, is acceptable.

It is acceptable that teachers should be evaluated by their students to some degree. Students are the direct receiver of teachers’ lectures and lessons. Therefore, they are fully aware of how the teachers perform in teaching activities. Actually, teaching is a sort of service provided by teachers. Like any other services, the customers have the right to evaluate, criticize and even to complain. Hence, students also have the right to give response to the services they have obtained.

However, things will go too far if teachers’ performance is completely decided by students’ assessments. Students should be encouraged to evaluate their teachers objectively. But the fact shows that most students are not so mature and it is hard for them to form a reliable judgment about teaching quality. Some students may be rebellious and take the evaluation as a means to contradict teachers. Even worse, if the evaluation is matched to rewards, teachers may dare not to be strict with their students for fear of low appraisal. Though students are entitled to the evaluation and criticism of their teachers, it should be carried out on an objective and feasible footing. In conclusion, the practice of students’ evaluating teachers is acceptable within some framework. However, school authorities should strike a balance between students’ benefits and teachers’ interest, trying not to turn a good policy into a blade which hurts both sides.

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Some people believe that reading books can better develop people’s imagination and language skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (抽象类)

其潜在矛盾：理论与实践，读书固然可以提高，但是想象力需要走出去，语言能力需要不断的练习才能更好地提高。

Reading helps the development of individuals’ imagination and language skills. But imagination and language cannot be achieved by reading alone.

A persons’ imagination cannot be achieved without systematic education and special training. Neither can it be inherited from their ancestors. Imagination is something that people should learn by reading and practicing. Facts show that those who are imaginative tend to be hardworking and of good education background. People are not born with imagination. Reading, of course, is a crucial link in our current education system. Therefore, reading forms an indispensable element in developing imagination.

Language development is based on reading too. There are four skills required in language learning: listening, speaking, reading and writing. These four skills are closely associated with reading because it can provide learners with sufficient vocabulary and excellent linguistic senses. Actually, reading serves as a leading means for most students’ language acquisition.

However, the effects of reading should not be exaggerated. A person’s imagination requires his or her vision and information obtained from reading, but personal experiences are not dispensable. Imagination without personal experiences may turn out to be illusion or superstition. As for language learning, besides reading, constant practice tends to be of equal importance. After all, language is designed for communication, which focuses on practice.

In conclusion,…..

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In the past 100 years, human race has achieved great progress. In which areas do you think the most important progress is being made? In which areas do you think there is more need to make progress? (抽象类) Communication Information Education Medicine Globalization

The past century has witnessed unprecedented progress in many fields such as computer-based technologies, economy development and cultural communication. And it is also noteworthy that some other fields like medicine, social security and environment protection are waiting for further development.

主要取得成就和进步的领域包括：以计算机网络为代表的科技领域，经济发展水平和文化交流。(in the past, …but now….and its significance as well as effects. )

还需要进一步提高的领域包括：医疗技术的提高，社会保障体系的覆盖更广泛，国家之间的合作加强以应对一些全球性问题，在科技领域要加强新能源的研发以应对日益严重的能源短缺和环境问题，在生物科技领域我们还要保持生态的平衡等。

（注意：题目中命题者并没有明确规定两个问题要等量齐观，可以有偏重地写。）

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Fossil fuels are the main sources in many countries. But in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development? (科技类)

Easily accessible, lower price, mature technology of development / environment pollution (emission), limited reserves, exhaustible, not sustainable Environment-friendly, efficient, sustainable, widely-available

Present situation: lack of government subsidy and support, lack of technical support, limitation of people’s acceptance.

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Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat local produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? (抽象类)

从环境角度，长距离运输导致的能源消耗和废气排放；从经济角度，对于地方的经济会造成破坏，不利于地方产品的销售。(运输物流行业的发展使得运输成本极为低下，进口食品的成本价格甚至低于本地产的食品，对本地经济会造成严重的冲击，所以各国都有关税保护。) 现代航空运输业得发展，使得其运输能力大幅提高，单位产品的运输排放量极大地降低，甚至低于本地产品运输的排放量。

进口食品因为其较高的质量，集约化的经营，以及较高的劳动生产率，广受欢迎。 抛开环境和经济利弊，进口食品丰富了市场，提高了竞争，促进了质量，也丰富了我们的生活。

Nowadays, dazzling imported food permeates supermarket shelves and extends our diet choice. However, there arises some concern that it may cause environment problems and ruin local economy. In reality, despite some justification, this concern is of some exaggeration.

The revolution of modern delivery has considerably reduced the cost of transportation of products. For example, the introduction of container ship has facilitated the process of delivering some products of huge volume. In today’s world, the size and amount of goods are not in proportion to the cost of transportation. Thus the price of numerous imported goods is lower than the local ones. However, this advantage poses a threat to local farmers because low-price imported food may gnaw the market bit by bit. So, local economy should be protected by imposing some tariff on imported products.

International transportation is often bombarded with criticism for it guzzles up huge amount of fuels and thus causes colossal emission, which damages our environment. These skeptics are of some reason but never escape some exaggeration. Actually, compared with local food, the transportation of foreign food has been greatly improved for the adoption of some new airliners and container ships. And the most important thing is that imported food diversifies our diet and activates our market. The fact shows that in most cases people prefer to buy imported food for its high quality, low price and attractive taste.

Considering the above analysis, we can say the imported food is the natural product of globalized market. The advocate of local food seems to be of limited effects in protecting local economy and environment. It makes sense that we should promote the quality and marketability of local product, including local food.

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Research suggests that majority of criminals who are sent to a prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem? (Report)

Today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. Discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions.

It is not a rare scene that many criminals relapse into old offenses after being set free. The rise of this phenomenon can be attributed to three main factors in terms of the government, society and criminals themselves.

第一：不少刑满释放人员（ex-convict）在长期的关押后缺乏生存的技能，不能够融入社会，甚至遭受到社会的歧视。

第一， 在监狱中没有得到充分的改造（Rehabilitate），强调惩罚，忽视教育。 第二， 也存在一些罪犯，惩罚不够，导致认为犯罪成本过低，容易再次犯罪。 第三， 惩罚过重，导致产生仇恨(hatred)，报复心理(revenge)。

The most striking cause behind this issue is that most ex-convicts have lost some basic living skills after a long imprisonment. They cannot adapt to the society smoothly or even suffer discrimination from the society. Hence some of them may find that to commit crimes is the only way to survive and to get social recognition. On the other hand, it cannot be denied that some criminals have not been rehabilitated in the prison. They are not remorseful for what they have done to others. When they re-step into the society, they feel it justified to do anything as they like because they never consider other people’s sufferings and losses. Besides, some people are born with the mentality different from ordinary people. They are subject to the impulse of committing crimes anytime and anywhere.

In dealing with this problem, there may be countless ways, but the priority should be given to two of them. First, the criminals should be given some training in order to grasp some basic living skills. Once they step into the society again, they can get adapted quickly and make their own living lawfully. Secondly, as for most criminals, sheer punishment may cause rebellion and revenge. So education should be given to criminals in combination with punishment until they realize their wrongness and deeply regret their wrong doings.

In conclusion, most criminals re-commit crimes when set free mainly because they are isolated from the society and lack basic skills for sustenance. To tackle this problem, the first and foremost thing is to give them more training helpful for their later life. And our present imprisonment system should make some change as well.

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Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. （决策类）

平衡观点---结构好掌握，但是不容易论证

观点倾向— 减少财政援助，因为其不容易监督，可能会被挪用，不容易到达目标群体受众，不可持续。因此要以技术，教育等援助为主。（进行局部修正：经济援助也不能完全停止，

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因为其毕竟更直接，尤其是在重大的灾难中。）

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Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (决策类) 把原文中的宏观，抽象，涵盖太广的概念进行具体化，可操作化（scientific research, less useful subjects）：

At universities, some subjects like literature, music and art are commonly regarded as less useful compared with some other subjects such as mathematics and engineering. This leads to some prejudice that the less useful subjects deserve less financial support from the government. I really doubt the justification of this view.

一个核心论证的主题是：为什么会有人认为文学，音乐等人文科目是没什么用处。 一旦你否定了对方的这个看法，那么less useful 会导致less support的结论，自然不成立。论证文学，艺术等科目，equally important， equally indispensable, 因此要equally supported. 深层逻辑推进，需要论证主题：为什么和一些理工类科目而言，文学，艺术等科目同等重要？因为理工类的研究可以迅速地转换成产品，或者有效地提高生产效率，产生直接的经济效益。如果从经济效益角度来说，似乎人文学科不能够产生直接的效益，因此似乎不那么重要，然而事实如此吗？

People hold the belief that some scientific subjects are more important due to their immediate reward and practical use. (提出一个问题：难道衡量一切的重要性的标准就是经济效益吗？这个答案显然是不对的。除了经济效益之外，还有什么也是对人重要的，显然，精神需求，道德要求，社会秩序，社会公平，批判思维，自由，权利，审美等等，某种程度而言，这些东西才是保证人幸福的根本，而不是一些具体的产品，或者财富。而这些东西，只有人文学科能够培养，丰富。)This poses a question to us: whether we should judge everything based on their use or profits. The answer to this question is surely negative. We hold it self-evident that some other elements also play indispensable roles in constituting our happiness and welfare. For example, moral standards, social order, equality, critical thinking, freedom, human rights and aesthetic needs all lead to our sense of happiness. The elimination of one of the above elements may cause some disturbance and discomfort.

And scientific research surely can bring us some materialistic comfort but fails to satisfy us mentally. Obviously, humans cannot survive without spiritual backup, but the absence of mobile phones, nuclear bombs will never threaten our subsistence.

As indicated above, scientific research definitely deserves the government financial support, because it changes our life and benefits us a lot. But some subjects like art and literature are also

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essential for people, thus they should be financed by the government. The bias that scientific subjects outweigh the others should be wiped away completely.

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Some people think that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up pollution that they have caused. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (谁造孽，谁负责)

There is an assumption that governments should not pay for the cleaning of pollution because they are not the perpetrators. However, I think, governments should not deny the responsibility in dealing with and paying for cleaning up pollution which, though, is caused by companies and individuals.

Body 1: why the government should pay for the cleaning? Because the payment comes from taxation.

It is commonly accepted that people should pay for their own misbehaviors and errors. This principle, unquestionably, applies to the present case. That is to say, it is companies and individuals who have polluted the environment. Hence, they have to pay for the cleaning up. However, one thing that is worthy of our attention is that companies and individuals have paid taxes to the governments. If they pay for the pollution, their payment will be doubled. And governments, as the deputy agency, should spare their budgets for cleaning the environment. Body 2: what’s the fault of government in polluting the environment? They have the responsibility of supervising and regulating companies’ activities.

As for this case, however, governments cannot escape the blame of negligence and dereliction of their duties. It is a common practice that governments have the responsibility to regulate and supervise companies’ activities. They should take some precautions against the possible misbehavior; and when those offenses occur, they should take immediate measures. Thus, the occurrence of pollution can, to a certain degree, be attributed to the governments’ failure of carrying out their duties properly. And they should pay for their own faults.

Body 3: should companies and individuals deny all the faults in pollution? Of course, they should take some responsibility. As for those corporations who have made serious pollution, penalty should be inflected on them. as for individuals, environmental awareness should be promoted.

谁造成污染，谁必须处理，因此公司和个人造成污染，必须有公司和个人负责。但是问题在于：谁来监督？谁来判定污染是如何造成的？对于那些没有人负责的污染，谁来处理？是不是找不到污染源就不处理？

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就应该加强监督，避免公司和个人造成更多的污染；在已经发生污染的地方，由来协调强制性地让公司和个人来解决污染问题；同时对于更大范围内的污染问题，必须要治理，的税收来自民众，因此解决污染问题的买单，其实就是民众买单。 比较题型：Some people think that university education can only benefit students themselves. Therefore the tuition should be paid completely by the students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （谁受益，谁买单）

Nowadays, some people are no longer accustomed to some boring and routine jobs. They choose to do some temporary ones, thus having more free time to do things of their own interest. It is an acceptable choice and lifestyle for some people though it may not be suitable for all of us.

A stable job may turn out to be a nightmare to some people, especially youngsters saturated with energy, personality and creativity. Perhaps the most intolerable thing of a stable job is its lack of flexibility. Employees in the company are required to get in and out of work according to the fixed time. They are forced to follow the strict schedule and do some routing things every day. Moreover, almost all stable jobs demand the employees’ full involvement. Thus it is hard for people to spare more time to accompany their family members and have good time with their friends. Rarely can some young people bear this isolation, boredom and restriction.

However, temporary jobs seem to offer a balanced solution to this dilemma. Undoubtedly, most people choose temporary jobs for their flexibility and freedom. Perhaps, they just need to work for several months in a year. Thus they have enough time to do things they like such as travelling around the world. As for young people fresh from schools, what they need most may not be great fortune, but a wider vision. If they do temporary jobs, they can step out to see the world. From another aspect, temporary jobs tend to be demanding in one’s creativity and inspiration, and sometimes less exploitative. For those creative and capable souls, less restriction and more space are their priority in choosing jobs.

Of course, every lifestyle has some disadvantages. When a person makes a choice, that means he or she abandons something. Temporary jobs are the choice of this sort. They can provide more freedom and flexibility, but it may also mean unstable income, occasional unemployment and lack of sense of belonging. Nevertheless, it is a personal choice.

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Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century? (Report)

如果不善于开头，那么就简洁地开头，扬长避短，注重在中间段加强逻辑和层次，同时注意用词和句型。

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Some people are confident that the new century will unfold a brighter future for us with more opportunities and positive changes. In the long run, our world is changing for better, but excessive optimism will overshadow many problems before us. （考官比较青睐的开头，简洁大方，力道猛。） It is noteworthy that human beings have made radical progress in some fields such as economic advancement and the improvement of living standard. Science and technologies have also witnessed substantial development in the past centuries. In the coming century, all these will continue to improve undoubtedly. …..

However, there remain some problems. For example, the most serious problem confronting us is the deterioration of our environment. Though we have made great efforts, there are no signs of

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recovering. In the 21 century, how to improve our environment seems to be a headache for us all. Another example is that the widening gap between the rich and the poor seems to be a worldwide crisis. This problem will become much more serious in the new century if we cannot find some effective countermeasures. In addition, people have showed much concern about the energy crisis. Some conventional energy resources will be exhausted in the new century, but to date no cheap alternative energies are available. 结论段：

In conclusion, the future will be an age of opportunities and hopes. However, opportunities always come along with challenges and hopes go in company of setbacks. The bright prospect of the coming century cannot blur some problems which need our solution urgently.

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Today, the development of technologies is changing the way people interact with each other. In which ways does it change the types of relationship between people?

Does it have a positive or a negative effect on the social development? (科技类Report) In what ways: mobile phones, internet, transportation means, telecommunication.

Positive or negative effects: promote efficiency, enhance convenience; quicken our living tempo, bring about more pressure, contribute to the income imbalance.

Air travel is criticized for excessive consumption of resources and pollution. But people are unable to refuse its efficiency and convenience.

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amount of pollutants of aeroplanes is several times much more than that of ordinary vehicles. It is the culprit of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide, which is devastating to our environment. In the meantime, air travel consumes a lion’s share of our limited natural resources such as oil. Under most circumstances, travel by air is the privilege of a minor population. But its resource consumption is out of proportion. To a certain degree, it is an unequal form of resource distribution. Objectively, it will lead to fast exhaustion of our resources.

However, it does mean there are no redeeming features of air travel. / However, people cannot turn a blind eye on the benefits of air travel. Undoubtedly, it has enhanced our efficiency in doing business or traveling especially long distances. Some traditional transportation means are time-consuming, but air travel shortens the trip even between continents to several hours. Personally, it is perhaps the most comfortable and relaxing means of travel. It is not like the monotonous and tiring journey of train. Its high speed and smooth flight render people forget all nuisances of travel.

Thus, it is hard to judge air travel to be a blessing or a curse. It does bring some problems, but its benefits to all of us are also obvious. Maybe it is always the focus of criticism before some clean energy is applied to aeroplanes.

(2009.8.13) Bar Chart

Some people believe that the subjects and lesson contents should be decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. (青少年教育类)

明确立场：我认为可以适当地规定学生学习的科目，比如数学，语言和一些基础文化课程，但是对于课程内容，应该尽少地干预，主要因为可能会在其中渗透形态意识（ideology）, 并且未必是教育的专家，不熟悉教育的规律。同时可能会在教育中灌输服从的观念，使得学生缺乏批判性思维。(联系中国的教材中去除鲁迅实例进行思考)。 原则：教育应该兼容包并，应该于任何政治，和派别。

In many developed countries, the subjects and contents of lessons are not determined by the governments, for people are concerned that government’s interference may destroy the independence of education. I am in favor of this idea but hold that government’s supervision cannot be denied completely.

Education is to equip students with critical thinking as well as theoretical knowledge. Thus what students should learn and how they learn the subjects are of considerable impact for themselves, no less to the society. Given the above targets of education, the choosing of subjects and contents turns out to be a demanding task which requires expertise and insights.

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Obviously, teachers enjoy immense priority in that they are professionals in education and they are aware of students’ needs. There may be some government members who are also teaching experts, but the majority of them lack the nearest contact with students, and the first-hand information. Some of them may have much more power, but that is not a convincing and acceptable reason in deciding education contents.

Compared with teachers’ role, governments tend to be lacking in objectivity. More or less, governments prefer to implant some ideas such as obedience and discipline in education. Students are taught to be docile and even servile, and they are taught to be members easy to control, not to voice their protest to the governments. Critical thinking is a fearful thing for the governments. 结论：因此当局对于教育的影响应该仅仅局限在规定教学的基本科目，对教育进行投入，而教学方式和教学内容的选择，应该交给真正懂得教育的学校，以及老师。与此同时，接受社会，学生，以及教育委员会的监督。

In conclusion, governments’ action toward education should be within the range of deciding some basic subjects such as mathematics, and of supporting education financially. But the choosing of teaching methods and contents should be taken in charge by schools and teachers, and be supervised by the society as well as students. (2009.8.22) Bar Chart

Some people believe that news media is influencing people’s lives and just brings negative effects today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (抽象类)

News media suffers much criticism from some people. They hold that it is misleading, sensational and fussy. Their criticism, objectively speaking, is of some justification, but too radical and cynical.

Body one: 指出新闻媒体的负面影响具体是那些，比如夸大，迎合观众以提高收视率，歪曲，甚至造假，甚至某些媒体代表政党和团体的利益，此外信息的爆炸给现代人带来了焦虑和压力（information explosion）。

Body two: 讨论“just”的问题，是不是只带来负面影响。提供了丰富的信息(abundant information), 加强了人，国家，社会之间的沟通和理解；加强了对于的监督，促进了社会的透明和公正（enhance the transparency and justice），揭露了社会的黑暗, 保证了社会的秩序（disclose the dark side of our society and guarantee social order）。

如果我们的社会没有媒体，那么我们的沟通就会大受影响.任何一个事物都有两面，就媒体而言，其负面影响固然不可避免，但是总体来说是瑕不掩瑜，我们要加强对于媒体的监督，促进媒体的健康发展。（In conclusion, hardly can we imagine what our society would become of without news media. At least it serves as a window to know the society and a channel through which we can make our own voice. Objectively, nothing is flawless and media is no exception, which necessitates our supervision. ）

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(2009.8.29) Bar Chart

In the past, people used to travel to different places to see the differences. Today, the places around the world seem to be similar. What are the causes of the similarity? Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (社会现象类+Report)

如果以“全球化”开头，势必大多数人都会这么做，那么就要防止考官“审美疲劳”，但是如果不以全球化开头，又可能会让考官觉得不具备常识。如何协调？

Today, it is not surprising that even aboriginals surf the internet with laptops and even Beijing, a city saturated with traditional culture, is scattered with skyscrapers and subways just the same as New York. Globalization has rendered our world a place without any mysteries. No striking differences exist between different cultures.（不需要去说观点） What are the causes?

(1) The widespread of information

(2) Travel and transportation means develop at an alarming rate. (3) Cultural communication acceleration (4) Trade development (5) Economic development. Advantages or disadvantages? (1) it seems to be an inevitable trend.

(2) Efficiency, convenience, and the improvement of our living standard.

(3) However, the loss of individuality, loss of diversity of culture, and loss of traditions (some

lesser languages, and cultures disappeared. ) (4) To some degree, the homogeneity is to some degree the copy of America, defined as

Americanization.

(2009.9.5) Bar Chart

Today, globalization is making a lot of places more and more similar, what are the reasons? Analyze the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon. (社会现象类)

(2009.9.12) Table

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Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (教育类)

首先，赞成childcare是很必要的，因为孩子是一个民族和社会的希望，良好的抚养会给孩子无论是生理和心理都有着良好的促进。>而父母是孩子成长最重要的监护人，培养孩子也是父母不可推卸的责任,有科学研究表明，缺乏父母关爱的孩子在其成年阶段会有很多弊端，比如无法建立良好的人际关系，缺乏创造性等。>与此同时，年轻一代的父母却非常缺乏必要的，系统的关爱孩子的方法，那么鼓励年轻父母学习系统的childcare课程就显得非常必要。

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理论上每个父母最好都接受这样的培训课程，但是事实上有很多因素使得这一建议变得不确定。>现在年轻的父母工作压力大，生活节奏快，很难抽出更多的时间去学习课程，甚至很难抽出时间去关心孩子。> 造成这一现象的原因显而易见，主要是因为生活成本高，社会保障缺失等。> 因此，首当其冲的要提供完善的保障设施，给父母更多的补贴（subsidy），尤其是给年轻的母亲更多的补贴，给她们更多的时间。// 此外，childcare也并非全是父母的责任，整个社会都有义务来关心孩子的成长，学校，社区和，都有义务来给孩子创造一个健康的成长环境，提供良好的关爱和教育。

Theoretically, every young parent should have access to courses of this sort, but many disturbing factors render this proposal uncertain to carry out. For example, quickening living pace and heavier burden make young people unable to spare time to learn the courses. Even worse, if the courses are of high price, some parents will be squeezed out due to their inability to pay. So what matters is not whether young parents are willing to take courses, but whether the government can provide them with free training. And they should also enjoy some subsidies so they can attend the courses without worrying about survival.

One thing should not escape our attention; that is, child care is not only the duty of young parents, but the whole society should take some responsibility. The community, government and school, all of them should make efforts in caring for the growth of children. They have the obligation to create a healthy environment for children, and child-care course is just one link of the whole chain.

As suggested above, it is advisable for young adults to attend some courses designed for childcare. This will be helpful for cultivating a healthy and promising generation. But it should be noted that the government should provide better security and more subsidies for young parents. Schools and communities should also take their responsibilities in caring for children. （永远要记住，责任承担者government, school and community）

(2009.9.17) Table

Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (决策类)

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Body one: 在服刑中让有才能的罪犯工作有一些可取之处. >>>具体而言，可以创造社会价值；>>>可以发掘罪犯的才能，物尽其用，人尽其才，罪犯的才能不能因为他的罪行而被否定；>>>再次，罪犯通过实现自己的价值，也可以树立信心，尽早得到改造rehabilitated；>>>并且，通过让罪犯工作，使得其能力或者技能得到保持，当他重新踏入社会，可以很快利用自己的技能谋生适应社会，而不至于重新犯罪。

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Body two:工作固然重要，但是对于不同的罪犯，改造的手段并不相同。比如说，对于犯罪程度极为严重，犯罪的后果极为恶劣的罪犯，应该采取严厉的惩罚，才能够起到威慑的作用deterrence。

（对于body one内容特别多，而局部修正部分内容很少的情况，最好将body one拆分成两段，这样就形成总体的5段，看起来更均匀，得体。）

In conclusion, there are some advantages in encouraging better talented lawbreakers to work. Work can give them the opportunity to redeem their faults and render them some chances to be rehabilitated. But for those convicted murderers or terrorists, severe punishment may be more suitable in order to have some deterrence for other potential criminals. (2009.9.26) 流程图

In some countries some school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time between finishing high school and attending university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for school leavers' decision. Give your own opinion and reasons. Use your experience of life to explain it. （青少年教育类）

参考题目：

Some people believe that students who graduate from high school should have one year’s time to obtain work experience before going to university. Do you agree or disagree? 参考题目二：

In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. What is your opinion?

(2009.10.8) Line Graph

Some people believe that parents have great influence on the children’s growth but influence from the outside play a more important role. Do you agree or disagree? (青少年教育类)

In most cases, the early part of an individual’s growth is influenced by his or her parents more. But with their growth, the influence from our society begins to take a prominent part.

(设想把题目换成是父母影响重要，还是学校影响重要，这样题目难度略有增加。) When weighing up the importance of influence on children’s growth from parents and schools, both are not mutually exclusive. It is obvious parents determine children’s personality and schools widen their horizon; the former shapes children genetically while the latter mould them psychologically.

Degradable material; awareness of environment protection (2009.10.10) Table

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Today, the increase of production of consumer goods is leading to the damage of natural environment. What are the reasons and give your solution to the problem. (Report)

Throwaways, packages and plastic bags are not rarely seen in today’s market characterized by the soaring diversity of goods and abundance of commodities. However, these have brought serious damage to our environment, which should be dealt with immediately.

为了刺激消费，很多产品往往过度包装，比如月饼，这些包装造成严重的资源浪费，并且后会污染环境。(Manufacturers are aware of some tricks that over-package of commodities can spur consumers’ purchase. Therefore, millions of goods are packed with dazzling diversified boxes such as the moon cake in China. Therefore, to satisfy the monstrous need of producing packages, deforestation becomes rampant and millions of hectares of forests and woodland fell before producers’ axes.

为了便利而产生的一些产品如方便袋，一次性筷子等，固然提升了我们的效率，带来了极大的便利，但是这些物品对资源的浪费严重，尤其是一次性塑料袋，不容易降解（are not subject to degradation），对环境污染很大。 此外， 消费品的丰富刺激了人们的消费，造成了严重的浪费，生产的过程本身也是对环境的破坏。而且，在消费主义横行猖獗的时代，消费大于保护，人们普遍缺乏环境保护的意识，对环境是剥夺，造成了当下自然环境的恶化。

And also the abundance of commodities has stimulated conspicuous consumption, which leads to serious waste of resources. In particular, some luxurious products may have more serious impact on our environment due to their extravagance and greediness. In the meantime, in the era of consumerism, consumption outweighs protection; exploitation replaces preservation. In another word, people are lacking in environment protection awareness. This may be the root cause of environmental deterioration. 如何去解决问题：

(1)要积极参与进来( the pressing environmental problem necessitates governments’ immediate involvement.)，指定一系列的，比如，禁止一次性消费品的生产，或者征收重税。同时禁止过度包装产品。

(2)通过教育促使人们养成节俭的习惯，避免过度消费。(Education helps people develop the virtue of thrift, and thereby avoiding over-consumption.)

(3)提升人们的环境意识，加强精神需求建设，避免陷入纯物质主义（In the meantime, the common environment awareness should be promoted and spiritual needs intensified. People should be dissuaded from plunging into sheer materialism.） (2009.10.24) Bar Chart + Table

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Some people think the university education function should prepare the students for employment, but others believe university education can offer many other functions.(values and theoretical knowledge)

Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (青少年教育类)

(2009.11.7) Line Graph

In some countries, the rate of crimes committed by teenagers is increasing. What are the reasons and what can be done to relieve the problem? (Report) Juvenile delinquency

The new century has witnessed tremendous progress in many aspects involving science and economy, but the field of education, especially for young people, experiences tiny leaps. The very reason of education, combined with some other factors, is the root for the increasing crime rate of youngsters. (2009.11.14) Table

Some people believe that professional workers should be paid more than sports and entertainment

stars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (社会现象类)

(2009.11.19) Line Graph

Some people think that introducing some new technologies can improve people's life quality in the developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (决策类)

New technologies’ effects are direct and immediate, but not sustainable.

Free education can change the situation of poverty and underdevelopment, but it is a long way to go.

(2009.12.3) Line Graph + Bar Chart

Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion? (社会现象类)

一份固定的工作也许是很多人的梦想，但是对于有些人，却可能是穿肠毒药（nightmare）不能忍受，他们更喜欢临时工作，因为可以享受自由。对我而言，临时工作也并非完美无缺。

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One man’s meal may be another’s poison.

This is an era in which personality and freedom are highly valued. Free lifestyle with high quality becomes the trend for young people especially in some metropolitans. Most of them are not willing to be tied to the work and have their steps restricted. Temporary jobs become their right choice.

Social progress is always accompanied by some revolution of concepts and ideas. The rise of this preference in temporary jobs is a sort of reflection of the change. It symbolizes, to some degree, the openness of youthful personality, freed spirits and respect for personal choice.

(2009.12.12) Table

Some people believe that using modern technology to work at home benefits workers only, not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (科技类) (2009.12.19) Bar Chart

Some people hold that crime is a big problem all over the world and we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (抽象类)

Deterrence, countermeasures. Severe punishment will have deterrence on those potential criminals and they may dare not to commit crimes.

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