高考英语百日训练之应用文写作(9)含答案详解

【题文】

假设你是李华，你的外籍好友Jane在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一等奖。请你给她写一封信，内容包括：1.向她表示祝贺； 2. 请她介绍语言学习的经验. 注意：1.词数100左右

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数.

参考词汇：汉字拼写大赛:Chinese Character Spelling Contest Dear Jane, I’m Li Hua.

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Li Hua

【答案】 Dear Jane

I’m Li Hua .On hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Character Spelling Contest held by my school, I felt exceedingly excited! Congratulations to you!

As your good friend, I am proud of you! Your proficiency in Chinese Character as well as your deep dive into Chinese culture has left a lasting impression on me. It came as no surprise that you won the contest. You deserve it! I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language. I really wish to improve my English , so could you please share with me your own experience and unique views on language learning?

I will be grateful if you write me back. I am looking forward to your early reply. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】本书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息：假设你是李华，你的外籍好友Jane1.向她表示祝贺； 在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一等奖。请你给她写一封信，内容包括：2. 请她介绍语言学习的经验。

写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清楚试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：参加国际游学的好处；可能遇到的问题；你的看法。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

be proud of，【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on + v-ing，leave a lasting impression on，look forward to，in advance。还运用了It came as no surprise that you won the contest.这句话运用了主语从句；I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language.这句话运用了宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：as well as， so, and等等。 【标题】江西省八所重点中学2018届高三下学期联考英语试卷 【结束】